2 Sonnets I wrote today

I wrote you a song, it was out of key
Words were all jumbled, a terrible sight.
Tryin' to explain just what you mean to me.
No matter how I try nothing seems right.
You're too perfect for these words that I say
So forgive me for this clumsy charade.
You're just that boy who can blow me away
And I just can't fix the mess that I made
I was scared to leap so I couldn't fly
You spread my wings and you showed me the way
You're the one who brought this gleam to my eye
So you can't blame me if I were to say
I wrote you a song, it was out of key
Tryin' to explain just what you mean to me.


here is the second one:

Why do we pretend that we see the light?
Can't you tell there is only darkness here?
Through the woods we got lost in blackest night
And for us there is no way out I fear.
The lies that you told and the dreams I weave
Has lead us down this hopeless patch of road.
You were so willing, eager to deceive
My dreams eagerly wanting lies you told
And this folly leads us both astray
To forgotten paths, lost forever more
Dreaming so sweetly of the light of day
not to be seen, as much as we implore.
So do not tell me that there is light to come
my heart is broke, and too my soul undone



what do you think?