Monday, January 9, 2012

Addiction

(so I decided I would post all my poems up on my blog. One every few days. I  have written these from the age of 15 and to 20. I will post them and provide a brief explanation if there is one. I hope you enjoy.)

The first poem is called Addiction. I wrote it when I was 16 and first really discovered attraction in a sexual way. It was a topic of a lot of my poems back then, and it is the first in my folder. Tell me what you think 


Addiction


A silly smile,
A warm touch,
Our bodies yearn
For each others touch.
Addiction
Is the word I use
I am addicted to you.
You tease me gently
Laughing at my
Inability to resist
Happiness is all you bring
You pull.
And I will place my heart
Confidently in your hands
My addiction…
Do not break it.
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2 comments:

  1. UnknownJanuary 9, 2012 at 5:12 PM

    Has a haiku vibe in that it almost feels like a photograph of one moment. Could just be me, but it's kinda cool.

    I wish it was longer, though! I feel like it's just scratching the surface of everything you were feeling when you wrote it.

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  2. Wren NicholsonJanuary 9, 2012 at 5:33 PM

    I have a few poems of the same nature. I never wrote anything too long other then sonnets :) thanks though

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