Wednesday, January 11, 2012

Always By My Side

This is kinda just depressing. I can't remember why I wrote it or when I did- though I think I was 14... >>  This is making me feel old. Enjoy



Are you really here for good or will I
Lose you too.
Will good things fade with time like they
Always do?
You need to promise me, make me

Believe
You will never leave.

Maybe you will convince me
You only have one chance

Stay with me
Influence me that you won’t leave
Don’t let me lose
Everything I hold dear….

And that is you

2 comments:

  1. Is the "S" line missing in the first stanza?

    Anyways, though. How long have you been writing poetry? Always, or starting around 13/14?

    I wish you remembered when you wrote it, exactly! It'd be cool to have more exact context for it.

    I always used to hate this kind of poem (the letter thing), but this did it better than most poems I've seen like it.

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  2. yeah >> it took me six years to realize I missed the S. And I wrote poems starting at 13. I know I wrote this in CT- so I was no older then 14. And I can't write this way anymore XD I feel way to structured

    Coming from the girl who likes writing sonnets

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