Are you really here for good or will I
Lose you too.
Will good things fade with time like they
Always do?
You need to promise me, make me
Believe
You will never leave.
Maybe you will convince me
You only have one chance
Stay with me
Influence me that you won’t leave
Don’t let me lose
Everything I hold dear….
And that is you
Is the "S" line missing in the first stanza?
ReplyDeleteAnyways, though. How long have you been writing poetry? Always, or starting around 13/14?
I wish you remembered when you wrote it, exactly! It'd be cool to have more exact context for it.
I always used to hate this kind of poem (the letter thing), but this did it better than most poems I've seen like it.
yeah >> it took me six years to realize I missed the S. And I wrote poems starting at 13. I know I wrote this in CT- so I was no older then 14. And I can't write this way anymore XD I feel way to structured
ReplyDeleteComing from the girl who likes writing sonnets