Thursday, January 12, 2012

Backstabber

I know a bit more about this one. I was 17 when I wrote this and had a friend who really hurt me. I was feeling very angry and hurt so I lashed out with my words. It was really the only way I knew how at the time. Enjoy 


            Backstabber 



Hideous creatures
Hide behind your perfect mask
A horror only seen
By those who know you best 
So perfect on the outside
Like a star that will never stop it’s shine
But inside it’s a black hole
That swallows anyone who gets too close
You stab at everything I hold dear
And you try to break me apart from the inside out
Liar
Traitor
Cheat
You only do well when you get what you want
And no one else matters.
Backstabber
I hold nothing in any longer
Your blatant lies make me sick
Goodbye   

2 comments:

  1. I think this is my favorite so far. Tons of emotions, and it conveys it's message better (in my opinion) than the ones before it.

    Is this about who I think it's about?

    Anyway, good poem. I'm sure most people can relate.

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